Imitation Hepburn WIP3

Might as well post this on here, since I'm trying to get rid of the other account.

I'm going to try to sell this at an auction when it's done

I'd love critique! I want this to be good
First WIP: [link]
Second WIP: [link]
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Fourth WIP: [link]
Fifth WIP: [link]
Sixth WIP: [link]
Seventh WIP: [link]
Eighth WIP: [link]
Ninth WIP: [link]
Tenth WIP: [link]

Reference:
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